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Hey all,
Here's an entry into a competition that I've been working on for a few days - tell us what you think, any critiques etc etc - I'm not entering it until next month so there's time for some tweaks :)
The competition asked for a 30 second visual representation of Triple J, so I made them a commercial.
Enjoy!
-Fin
Here's an entry into a competition that I've been working on for a few days - tell us what you think, any critiques etc etc - I'm not entering it until next month so there's time for some tweaks :)
The competition asked for a 30 second visual representation of Triple J, so I made them a commercial.
Enjoy!
-Fin
posted by Luke at 2:31 PM
13 Comments:
Hmm... Actually my first thought after watching it a day after I made it is that perhaps I should avoid the dig at commercial radio - then I'd have more time to pace out the transformation of the boom box into Triple J's fantastical universe of splendour... lol
For some reason when I watch it the "Later that day..." only stays on the screen for half a second (not long enough for me to read it without pausing).
I like most the effects and the artistic 'feel' of it.
Doesn't feel complete though. Can you say briefly what you're intending to communicate through it? Then I'd have a better opinion on whether it achieves what you're after.
(Feeling very analytical in the midst of assignment writing...)
A good advertisement for Triple J. Though I am not a big fan of Triple J. What sort of video advertisement preparation services would you be able to provide?
Andrew Ling
Web Site: www.andrew-ling.com
That was cool. I like the "Buy me" part of it and I think it's effective. How did you do all the animation?
not trying to give conflicting opinions here (sorry jennifah!!) but personally i dont think the dig at commerical radio was really necessary - and as you said, for a thirty second video it takes up a lot of space, which could probably be used better to promote the triple j image/experience. thirty seconds is just long enough to put across one message (triple j is good), not two messages (triple j is good, commercial radio is bad). does that make sense? anyway, just my opinion. apart form that, the graphics/animation is really effective and it looks quite professional. good job!
That was really awesome Luke. I really loved the dig at commercial radio. It's a nasty poison full of all things linkin park and 50 cent and pussycat dolls mere sounds masquerading as something musical. And the ads are infuriating.
I shudder everytime I think of the bus to school with ads saying "Serena Russo institute of tafe. Send us some more Serena! Send us some more! Why not you????!! Why not now??!@&1"
If that doesn't make you want to leap out of your seat and rip the 10 watt radio out of its slot, nothing will!
I think as is, the ad captures quite nicely the Triple J style. They have the occaisional ad on during late night rage and during the daytime where some lame pop star gets belted with a mic with a Triple J logo on it which is so cute!!
Next beat the drum competition we are going in it!
Don't make me sing the update song. i don't like doing it!
Nice moving pictures. What did you use?
Lol, tis cool =P
probably much better than i could do.
Also, just wanted to say, nice job with church last night dude! keepin it fresh, i like!
do what aaron says.
update song, update song, i am singing the update song
Whoooaaa *wails loudly and off key*
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you slacker......
btw, is it just me, or did you make all the headings on this page chinese??? freaking me out....
he probably hasnt updated 'cause his old age meds wont allow it...
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